Thursday 12 March 2020

100 word count

Hello readers, today I am going to be telling you about my 100 word count story. It's when our teacher, Miss Scott, write's down specific words that we have to use in our story. It has to be 100 words exactly, so here is my week 3 100 word count story:


 My friends and I went to a murder mystery. I invited 20 friends, they all showed up at the venue.  Then the light turned off and one of my friends disappeared. We started to freak out and I said, “We just need to get out, we shouldn't stay”. I found some walkie talkies and said, “We should go in two’s and if you find anything just say something okay”. So we went and at the end there were only three teams left. Then we saw something, as it flew towards us I couldn't see what it was……… to be continued

The words that we had to use were, 'as it flew towards us i could't see what it was'.

I hope you liked it.

16 comments:

  1. Good evening Sophia.What a great challenge.I like how you didn't finish the story.It left me using my own imagination as to how the story ended.Did you find it hard to only use 100 words and did you have to keep track of how many words you did use?.

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  2. Hello Sophia.
    I hope you and your family are all doing well in your bubble.I can't wait to take Salt for a walk later.I think you have a little dog that looks like my dog.I will be going to Waterloo Park as there is plenty of space to avoid other dog walkers.
    What will you be doing today?.I hope to hear from you soon.

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  3. Hello Sophia.
    The sun is out and school starts tomorrow.We will be doing 'distance learning' instead of actually going to school.I can't wait to read about what you have been doing these holidays and I hope all goes well for the learning on the chrome books.
    Have a lovely week.

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  4. Good morning Sophia.
    This long distance learning is a great idea.I got to see and talk to some of the staff and children this morning via the computer.It's not as good as seeing them in person.
    I hope to see some of your work soon.I'd love to know how you are doing.
    Take care.

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  5. Hello Sophia.
    I can't wait to see what work you have been doing over the lock down holidays.
    Have a great weekend and enjoy the sun.

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  6. Hello Sophia.The sun is out and it's a beautiful day.We are now into week 2 of online learning.I can't wait to see what work you have been doing.
    Have a great week.

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  7. Hello Sophia.
    I hope to see some more of your work soon.I look forward to checking it out and I am sure,so are some other staff.Take care and have a great week.

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  8. Hello Sophia.
    I hope that all is well for you and your family.I look forward to seeing what other work you have been doing.Have a great weekend and take care.

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  9. Good morning Sophia.I was just checking your blog to see if there was any new work.
    Have a great week and take care.Keep safe.

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  10. Hello Sophia.I am looking forward to seeing what work you have completed over these lock down holidays.Some children have been very busy with baking,completing maths problems,writing stories and making videos.
    Have a great week and take care.All the best for the week.

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  11. Good afternoon Sophia.Just the usual check in to see if you have added any work to your blog.Have a lovely day.

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  12. Good afternoon Sophia.
    I just thought I would check to see if you had loaded more learning onto your blog.I would love to see what work you have been working on.I will check again soon.Take care.

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  13. Hello Sophia.
    I just thought I would check to see if you had loaded any learning to your blog.I look forward to see what work you have been working on during these long holidays.I will check again soon.

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  14. Hello Sophia.
    Just a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.

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  15. Hello Sophia.
    I am just leaving a comment to let you know that I have had a look at your blog today.

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  16. Hello Sophia.
    I am checking all the blogs in room 10 tonight so I am leaving a comment to let you know that I have looked at your blog.Have a great week.

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