- Hello Readers. Today I am going to be telling you about my narrative writing. We all had to write about a picture our teacher gave us here is my narrative writing and picture.
It was dark. I just got dropped off by my friend Katy, we were at my friend Abby’s birthday party. To be honest that was a great party probably the best since grade 4. That’s when the popular girl at school who genuinely made tons of friends without even trying. I mean I have friends but comparing her with me social wise, I am a loner, but I don’t even care I’ve got great friends. When we went to the party it was boring but the “ popular girl” slipped and her face fell on to the cake. I mean what can I say that was funny.
I was walking to the door in a weird posture, exhausted. *Ding* my phone lit up and I got a message from Abby. ‘THAT WAS AN AWESOME PARTY!’ I giggled. I got to my front porch and opened the door. My phone fell out of my hand, that moment was like time had just stopped. I was speechless, I couldn’t move. There was blood everywhere, and I fell to the floor. It was if i was parallized. It looked like their throats had been slit. I was sitting in a pile of blood and IT WAS MY MUM AND DAD’S BLOOD! I saw a note on the floor and it said ‘THIS IS PAYBACK’ it was written with my mum and dad’s blood. “So it was murder,” i said to myself. I wanted to get revenge.
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I would laugh too Sophia,if someone fell face first into a cake.I could only hope,that I had tried some of it first though.
ReplyDeleteI wasn't expecting the 2nd part of your story to go the way it did.
Who do you think was the suspect for this crime?.