Friday 29 May 2020

100 word count

Hello readers Today I am going to be telling you about my week 7 100 word count. I know last time I did my 100 Word count but this time it is different. I promise our teacher Miss Scott said to us that a boy from Ireland sent a photo to our teacher saying "I think that this photo would be good for you student's to write about".  But since it was a photo she did't give us specific words to write with. Here is my 100 word count and a photo of the picture 


One morning after I had my breakfast. I went on a walk into the forest. I brought my dog his
name in hunter.he ran so fast normally he doesn't do this and then I chased after him he was
standing on the rocks. Then he slipped and I got so worried but it was also kinda funny. I also
saw that raccoon. I don’t know what it was doing out here. It was so cold outside at this
point I was  really really confused. It was also holding the same box as last time.It ran off
really fast.   

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2 comments:

  1. Mrs Cassidy2 June 2020 at 15:50

    Great story Sophia.I like that there was a raccoon doing something different than just being a raccoon.The more stories you write,you can add him into it.
    Just remember that when you add a full stop,the next letter needs to be a capital.

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  2. Anonymous5 June 2020 at 12:46

    Hello Sophia,My Name is James. I like that you write your story. I liked the wrote it in bold I can see well in your story maybe next time you can squish your writing together? Bye then

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