One morning after I had my breakfast. I went on a walk into the forest. I brought my dog his
name in hunter.he ran so fast normally he doesn't do this and then I chased after him he was
standing on the rocks. Then he slipped and I got so worried but it was also kinda funny. I also
saw that raccoon. I don’t know what it was doing out here. It was so cold outside at this
point I was really really confused. It was also holding the same box as last time.It ran off
really fast.
name in hunter.he ran so fast normally he doesn't do this and then I chased after him he was
standing on the rocks. Then he slipped and I got so worried but it was also kinda funny. I also
saw that raccoon. I don’t know what it was doing out here. It was so cold outside at this
point I was really really confused. It was also holding the same box as last time.It ran off
really fast.
Great story Sophia.I like that there was a raccoon doing something different than just being a raccoon.The more stories you write,you can add him into it.
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Hello Sophia,My Name is James. I like that you write your story. I liked the wrote it in bold I can see well in your story maybe next time you can squish your writing together? Bye then
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