Friday, 5 June 2020

my narrative writing

  • Hello Readers. Today I am going to be telling you about my narrative writing. We all had to write about a picture our teacher gave us here is my narrative writing and picture.



It was dark. I just got dropped off by my friend Katy, we were at my friend Abby’s birthday party. To be honest that was a great party probably the best since grade 4. That’s when the popular girl at school who genuinely made tons of friends without even trying. I mean I have friends but comparing her with me social wise, I am a loner, but I don’t even care I’ve got great friends. When we went to the party it was boring but the “ popular girl” slipped and her face fell on to the cake. I mean what can I say that was funny.


I was walking to the door in a weird posture, exhausted. *Ding* my phone lit up and I got a message from Abby. ‘THAT WAS AN AWESOME PARTY!’ I giggled. I got to my front porch and opened the door. My phone fell out of my hand, that moment was like time had just stopped. I was speechless, I couldn’t move. There was blood everywhere, and I fell to the floor. It was if i was parallized. It looked like their throats had been slit. I was sitting in a pile of blood and IT WAS MY MUM AND DAD’S BLOOD! I saw a note on the floor and it said ‘THIS IS PAYBACK’ it was written  with my mum and dad’s blood. “So it was murder,” i said to myself. I wanted to get revenge.  


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Friday, 29 May 2020

100 word count

Hello readers Today I am going to be telling you about my week 7 100 word count. I know last time I did my 100 Word count but this time it is different. I promise our teacher Miss Scott said to us that a boy from Ireland sent a photo to our teacher saying "I think that this photo would be good for you student's to write about".  But since it was a photo she did't give us specific words to write with. Here is my 100 word count and a photo of the picture 




One morning after I had my breakfast. I went on a walk into the forest. I brought my dog his
name in hunter.he ran so fast normally he doesn't do this and then I chased after him he was
standing on the rocks. Then he slipped and I got so worried but it was also kinda funny. I also
saw that raccoon. I don’t know what it was doing out here. It was so cold outside at this
point I was  really really confused. It was also holding the same box as last time.It ran off
really fast.   

Friday, 22 May 2020

100 word count term 2

Hello readers today I am going to be telling you about my 100 word count. The reason why it is called 100 word count is because it needs to be 100 word exactly. 
Our teacher Miss Scott gives us specific words to use. The words we had to use were box, raccoon, chair, sky, and leaf. Comment down below if you can see those words .Here is my 100 word count.






Box    Racoon    Chair    Sky    Leaf


One  morning I woke up to a loud sound outside. I looked through my window and it was a raccoon looking through the garbage again. I was watching it look through the garbage since I was just sitting on a chair in my room. It took a box and left, I wondered why? Normally raccoon’s get food not boxes. So I followed the raccoon and the sky was so blue, I said to myself “What a nice day”. The raccoon put the box on a pile of leaves and put something in the box. There was a leaf inside the box.       to be continued   ……..






   

Thursday, 12 March 2020

100 word count

Hello readers, today I am going to be telling you about my 100 word count story. It's when our teacher, Miss Scott, write's down specific words that we have to use in our story. It has to be 100 words exactly, so here is my week 3 100 word count story:


 My friends and I went to a murder mystery. I invited 20 friends, they all showed up at the venue.  Then the light turned off and one of my friends disappeared. We started to freak out and I said, “We just need to get out, we shouldn't stay”. I found some walkie talkies and said, “We should go in two’s and if you find anything just say something okay”. So we went and at the end there were only three teams left. Then we saw something, as it flew towards us I couldn't see what it was……… to be continued

The words that we had to use were, 'as it flew towards us i could't see what it was'.

I hope you liked it.

Friday, 6 March 2020

My holidays

Hello readers today I am going to be telling you about my holiday well to be honest I don't like 2020. Because in Australia there are  bush fires and the animals that are dying. The plastic that we are throwing in the ocean well if you kill the animals you might be killing people as well .All the pollution from factories in the air. Also the Corona virus there are over 1 thoused  people that died from it. Here is some lyrics of a girl that sang it 


We're killing the earth and that's really "fun"
No one believes us because we are young
Our forests are turning to ash in a second
Ask California they'll tell you about it,
They'll tell you how they have lost all their homes
While Trump turns a blind eye and tweets on his phone
"Global Warming's an expensive little hoax"
For the last time
This is not a joke
Our factories are working and toxin's emitting
The ozone is crumbling and we won't stop putting-
Chemicals in what we're trying to breathe
Our future is stolen and we are the thieves
Sea levels are rising and icebergs are melting
The coral reefs are dying and no one is helping
Do you realize they keep the oceans alive
This started back in 1985
Don't come to me when your child can't think-
Of what a tiger is cause they're extinct
Don't cry to me when your fur coat ain't clean
The endangered list is now 41, 416
Dear 2045
I don't think we're gonna survive
If you end up hearing this story
I just wanna say
I'm sorry.





I hoped you liked my blog post remember our world is dying.

Friday, 14 February 2020

Floating Kid Magic

Hello readers,

You made it to 2020. Anyway today I am going to be telling you about this morning.

This morning El Gregoe came to our school the first thing he did were a couple of magic tricks, he has a lot of pets. He has a bunny lots of birds and he even has puppets as friends. He also made  a student float. He talked about being kind and not to bully. The words that he talked about were caring, empathy, responsible, resilient and respect and not to bully.   

Here are some pictures of El Gregoe.

                  
Hope you liked my blog post.

Monday, 16 December 2019

week one SLJ

Hello reader today I am going to show you my slide show for my week one SLJ.